"John's editing services are terrific. With his help, I was able to eliminate key flaws in my manuscript. I went from being unagented to getting published by one of the majors." ~Andrew S. Chilton, The Goblin's Puzzle (Knopf Books)

“John is a master at helping writers develop story ideas into clear and compelling plots with deeply-drawn characters and captivating narratives. His enthusiasm is purely infectious.” ~Michelle Leonard, Brave New Girls (CreateSpace)

“Whether you have an MFA in creative writing or just grabbed a laptop and started tapping out your first novel, your writing could be better. John Bemis can help you get there.” ~John Klekamp, Wicked South: Secrets and Lies (Goldenjay Books)

John loves supporting writers like you. Looking for feedback on your story-in-progress or finished manuscript? Interested in individual chapter notes? Need help organizing your plot or dealing with creative storytelling challenges?

John can help you.

He’s worked with many writers (several who are now published!) to develop stronger openings, deepen the characters and conflict, illuminate a story’s stand-out qualities as well as what challenges that are holding the story back from appealing to agents and publishers. John is available for one-on-one work, no matter what audience you’re writing for.

Consultation packages:

1. Full or Partial Manuscript Critique — Send John your complete or partial story, and he’ll provide specific guidance on what’s working and what needs to be improved. John provides you with an upfront quote based on the size of the project. Service includes manuscript notes, an editorial letter, and a Zoom follow-up to discuss next steps.

2. Zoom Consultation— Need help with a particular challenge you’re facing with your writing or the submission process? John works with writers on an hourly-basis over Zoom offering practical support and guidance. $150/hour

For more information about John’s consultation services or to get a quote: